Children's Authors' Bootcamp Fiction Manuscript Critique Service


The CAB Fiction Manuscript Critique service is available exclusively to writers who have formerly taken one of the Children's Authors' Bootcamp weekend workshops. Critiques will be done by Laura Backes, Linda Arms White, or one of CAB's qualified editorial consultants. Each manuscript will receive a detailed written critique that discusses the work's strengths and weaknesses in the areas of plot, character development, dialogue, description, theme, and writing style. Comments or examples of editing may also be written directly on the manuscript. Specific suggestions for revisions will also be included.

The rates for specific services are listed below. Please read the manuscript submission information at the end before submitting any work to the CAB Fiction Manuscript Critique Service.



Manuscript Critique Rates:

Manuscripts must be formatted as if you were submitting them to a publisher: typed, double-spaced; one-inch margins on all sides; an easy-to-read typeface (such as Courier) sized at 10 characters per inch. Please number each page consecutively, and include your name and the title of the work on the upper left corner of each page.

(Note: If you submit multiple manuscripts for critique, the charges below are for each manuscript, not the combined total of pages for all the manuscripts.)

Basic rate: Critique of a manuscript up to five pages long is $99.
Add $1 per page for each additional manuscript page.

Poetry: Same prices as above, geared according to the number of manuscript pages.

Critique and rewriting (if necessary) of query letter . . . . .$30

Critique of book proposal and outline (fiction or nonfiction)
Up to 10 double-spaced, typed pages. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .$99
11-20 double-spaced, typed pages. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . $149



Submission Procedure for Critiques

Before submitting, please email Laura Backes at Laura@write4kids.com or call 970/495-0056 to be put on the critique schedule (in emails, please state the length of your manuscript). You will then be given the address where you can mail your manuscript. Pre-scheduling a critique is important as we make every effort to respond to submissions in a timely manner.

Manuscripts must be formatted in the same way as if you were submitting to a publisher (following the manuscript formatting guidelines explained above). Please include a self-addressed, stamped envelope with enough postage for the material’s return. Manuscripts submitted by email will not be accepted. Include a check or money order made out to Children's Authors' Bootcamp for the full price of the critique, or your credit card number and phone number (we take Master Card, Visa, Discover and American Express).

Thank you for using the Children's Authors' Bootcamp Fiction Manuscript Critique Service. If you have any questions, please contact Laura at Laura@write4kids.com

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